sleeeeep's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Spoof of the Colossus]

good stuff

i kept getting lost on this damn game and gave it up. you just saved me a good amount of time to see the ending... kinda.

doctormario responds:

The story takes forever to develop. I initially wanted to do all 16 colossi, but that just messed up the timing too much. Thanks for watching. :)

[Ninja Vs Samurai]

good

i ay dont improove your skill to much i like the simple look of this movie it was very fun. maybe a few more sound efects were needed though

[Lick.]

decent.

to Wegra2007's review family guy didnt make up the concept of licking toads to get high so no he didnt steal this from family guy.

[Halo / Victory]

hmm

i thought this was gonna be about the halo video game...
as forthe actual flash it was pretty good even though the music kinda sucked i liked the super hero action

[The Unpresented]

im speechless...

amazing stuff.

[Vigilance 4]

alot to say about your series.

Now overall. Your art isnt that bad and sometimes i really hate the blank stare that "Kat" has, very annoying. Theres action going on but you see very little of it, i half like that and i half wanna see it animated. Your backgrounds at first really botherd me. They didnt fit well with the characters look. BUT by episode 3 i found myself getting used to em and in Ep. 4 i liked em. Your background give your movie a darker kinda feel to it, kinda a eerie feel to em. As for improving your art i dont see it as a problem. I think if people enjoyed the first movie they shouldnt expect improved graphics in each coming episode. You see alot of animators on NG that have some good series and in each one the special effects and graphics improve in each one. As for me and my movies i dont feel a need to improve each one dynamically with each coming episode. My only gripe is that i wish you would do a little more animating in your movies, but i know its hard animating as it is.

As for the sound its on par. Your choice of music from beganning to end is dead on. I love how you sync your music with your movie. As for voice acting it isnt the worlds best but its not that bad. especially for someone doing it them selves. As for your dialog it really is good wrighting. There were a few times it felt like you were making it up as you went. The scene where he tells what "Shell does" and the scene where she plays the voice recording back to him. other then that good stuff.

I think 4 is the best one yet, alot happend in this episode and left on a good note leaving you wanting more. Cannot wait for #5... any clue on how long when it will be submitted?

Overall im looking foward to your

cris17 responds:

ummmm no direct date on when 5 ill be out but your wait wont be weeks all i can say at this point, thanks for your review! :D

p.s. and yeah this is a pure improv series so i make it up as i go along with the lines. but dont worry theres a story as you can see, i just build on it as i go.

[Sonic and Mario ep: 2]

good in most parts...

but lacking in the story. The action is top notch. the effects are very very well done. But like you have probobly heard it feels to much like SMBZ. Espcially when you alot of the same cast. Though it isnt my type of humor i do know it works for alot of others. My main gripe is the story. Its really kinda weak. Theres nothing that draws me into the next episode... the only real reason i would watch #3 is just for the action. If you were to make movies that were just action like "mario VS sonic" and have no story it would be great. The story in this seems kinda bland and thrown together.

One minute there fighting bowser and eggman and the next there asking for his help to stop a robot that he sent after em, and he agrees to help? Mario and Sonic though in two differant worlds know each other somehow?
but keep it up and work on the story a bit and im sure you'll make front page soon.

[Brawl Funnies [Dick 1]]

how did this get on front page? seriously...

its pretty sad because the whole movie was a turd except that first clip by rina chan and the brawl boys... they should have put that movie out as a stand alone and avoided this crap fest.... the only reason i can think of this getting front page is because of that first clip.

[The Stick Showdown Collab]

meh

other then Muharrem17's part it was kinda bad looking. Some of the sticks were just really wirey looking...

[RocketMan saves the day]

make more!

make thousands of Rocket man movies!
"rocket man Doesnt save the day"
"Rocket Man makes a tuna sandwich"
"Rocket Man VS Rollerscate Man"
"rocket man takes a nap"
And so on!! i want MORE!