sleeeeep's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[NG 2009]

seems like something that should be on youtube

just a video montage really. but good i guess.

poprock responds:

Yo momma wears snowpants to the beach.

[momoiro]

meh

this seems kinda lazy. The backgrouns you just slapped a jepg in the back drew some lines to make it the ground and called it a "Stage". They where kinda ugly.

The music doesnt go with this at all.... at all.

No sound effect is your biggest flaw here though...

The actual stick animation was pretty decent though.

slugsfordinner responds:

thanks for the helpful critisism, i will take your advice and try harder next time!

Thanks again,
~Nate

[S13 - I Want It! Syndrome]

good

this was such a great movie. A nice change from the usual NG malarcky. Also i liked the russian dialog and english subtitles. If this doesnt get front page imgoing to spti on my moniter... justfor you. Also could you do voic work for a future movie of mine? In russian!??!

Nightwayfarer responds:

we'll i guess i can say some russian words for ya, just PM me and i hope i won't be bussy or dead ;)

[Luis Day Collab]

psh

this was pretty bad... slapped together bad. no real comedy... or animation...

fluffkomix responds:

you must be tired. go to sleeeeep.

i'm gonna stop talking now.

[Spoof of the Colossus]

good stuff

i kept getting lost on this damn game and gave it up. you just saved me a good amount of time to see the ending... kinda.

doctormario responds:

The story takes forever to develop. I initially wanted to do all 16 colossi, but that just messed up the timing too much. Thanks for watching. :)

[Vigilance 4]

alot to say about your series.

Now overall. Your art isnt that bad and sometimes i really hate the blank stare that "Kat" has, very annoying. Theres action going on but you see very little of it, i half like that and i half wanna see it animated. Your backgrounds at first really botherd me. They didnt fit well with the characters look. BUT by episode 3 i found myself getting used to em and in Ep. 4 i liked em. Your background give your movie a darker kinda feel to it, kinda a eerie feel to em. As for improving your art i dont see it as a problem. I think if people enjoyed the first movie they shouldnt expect improved graphics in each coming episode. You see alot of animators on NG that have some good series and in each one the special effects and graphics improve in each one. As for me and my movies i dont feel a need to improve each one dynamically with each coming episode. My only gripe is that i wish you would do a little more animating in your movies, but i know its hard animating as it is.

As for the sound its on par. Your choice of music from beganning to end is dead on. I love how you sync your music with your movie. As for voice acting it isnt the worlds best but its not that bad. especially for someone doing it them selves. As for your dialog it really is good wrighting. There were a few times it felt like you were making it up as you went. The scene where he tells what "Shell does" and the scene where she plays the voice recording back to him. other then that good stuff.

I think 4 is the best one yet, alot happend in this episode and left on a good note leaving you wanting more. Cannot wait for #5... any clue on how long when it will be submitted?

Overall im looking foward to your

cris17 responds:

ummmm no direct date on when 5 ill be out but your wait wont be weeks all i can say at this point, thanks for your review! :D

p.s. and yeah this is a pure improv series so i make it up as i go along with the lines. but dont worry theres a story as you can see, i just build on it as i go.

[Iron N' Bug]

you know i hate you.

this is garbge... and yet the song is addicting. i dont know how to feel about this flash... it felt right.

MrScriblam responds:

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[My SNES is Broke]

not bad

this wasnt pretty good. You maybe need to work on better sound effects... the narators voice was great but the voices for the actual characters were kinda weak auce. AND the fact that they didnt have any eye balls really bothered me to.... but not bad... work on the animation a little and keep it up... oh and i love the hulk music you used from the old tv show.

Swhistler responds:

The hulk music is the best sad music. I was just trying out the style (eyes and all that) for this cartoon because it would be easy for me to move and tweak, not that I really stick to styles. By the time I do my next cartoon I'll have forgotten how I did this one.

[star wars small figth piv]

wtf is pivot?

it makes your movies have a grainyy look to em that i like but its a lil choppy like everyone else says.

What is pivot
And if its so hard to do then why not just make em on flash?

Bmtm responds:

because i dont know how to do them in flash u retarded assrape fuck girl......

[Jim Day 08]

nope...

yuck city.

Jimtopia responds:

I love that place.